小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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my home,where at the xiaoshang hangzhou,my home have fife persons ,wife miss xu and my son jerry and my wife's parents.our live very happy,we go to climb mounting ,at afternoon,then back home at 18:00,we like sports,because sports will make our healthy.sometimes,we go to walk go outside ,because outside's air is fresh.