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Should College Student Hire Cleaners? That some college students at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week has led to a heated debate. Some people advocate and support the practice. They maintain that hiring cleaners to keep the dorms clean can help students save time, which they can spend on their studies. Others, however, argue that hiring cleaners could help students save time and devote to their studies are merely a pretext.Typically, college education is not dominated by heavy loads of coursework and college students have ample time to manage their own affairs apart from studies. Usually, those students who claim they are too busy to clean their own dorms are most often found preoccupied with playing computer games or shopping. They refuse to do manual labor because they tend to regard themselves as elites once they succeed in entering a college. Personally, I think college students shouldn't hire cleaners. In performing the cleaning himself/herselft a college student learns to share the responsibility for managing a public space of which one is a part. And by doing so, the student also shows respect for the common welfare of the entire dorm- Cleaning one's own dorm is a small but necessary process whereby one becomes a responsible person.
