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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
Dear kpoHsales, This month 12 25th during the exhibition held in New York I learned that your company's one product which No.5607.I'm very interested in that one,and I think if you can sent me a piece of price list and instruction.I'm very thanks for your agreement and I really hope that we can establish business relationship . yours sicerely hubin
