托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

I agree with this statement. I think our judgments should be carefully to point out. Because snap judgments mean that you didn't think twice about the problems and you quickly made a judgment of the things. This judgments came out from your unconscious thought. Do a snap judgment as a casual action. Maybe you have ever considered the result when you said your opinion. So my opinion is we needn't care much about others' snap judgments. for example, there are much more people becoming a fans of singer star, actor star and etc. when you look or hear their behaviors, you might hard to understand. At that moment, you probably do a quick judgment that they are so silly. they spent so many money on the idle and cann't get anything back. In your sight, you think the TV shows made a bad effects to the young people. The sociaty should point a correct way to them. But you don't know that these idles give a strong spirit to the young people. They have their dream and the stars they like can support them. So please don't snap judgments when you don't know anything. We should learn how to respect people more.