文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
The main difference between my college life and my middle school life There is no denying that high school and college have much difference, all things considered, two factors contribute to this case: curruculum and campus activities. With entrance exams ahead, middle school students, especially in junior three and senior three, have a tight schedule. At the end of the day, many feel as if their heads are going to spilt at any moment. Extracurricular activities are hardly find their way into such a schedule. Under the great pressure of learning, they barely have time to develop their own interest and build up their other capacities. By contrast, with an average of five or six classes per day, college students have enough time to do the thing they want to do. A case in point is that they can visit a place of interest on a free weekday. Moreover, college offers them a rich variety of activities, ranging from costume parties to learned lectures. Many students are engaged in campus clubs and societies. So college life endows us with more time and opportunities to develop in an all-round way than we had in middle school. In conclusion, it's time for us to realize the difference between our middle school life and college life so as to work harder in search of knowledge ae well as promote ourselves in other aspects.