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Recently a survey about the idea of saving money has been brought to public attention. A mass of students believe that saving money exerts good effects on themselves while other students frown at it,saying that using money in advance is better. Saving money,personally,is more likely to be the wise choice. First of all,saving money tends to give us a sense of security. You are supposed to possess the extra money in case of an emergency. For most people, the students in particular,the extra money can play an important role in some incidents such as illness,tuition and even sudden accidents. It’s worth thinking about how can you safely get through these difficulties without the extra money.Secondly,you can use the money you saved to help others. A classic case in point is that the friendship between you and your friend can be developed deeply when you give a hand to your friend as he is in trouble. In addition,using the money to help people in need is also beneficial.What’s more,saving money is definitely a good habit and it’s the Chinese traditional virtue which we would inherit,promote and adhere rather than ignore,misunderstand and give up. As the saying goes, “Whatever is,is right”. The virtue which exists in the Chinese history of thousand years also proves the value of itself. Taking into account all the relevant factors offered,we may reasonably draw the conclusion that saving money is advisable. It does more good than harm from a great variety of aspects. As a result,the extra money brings you the happiness when you recall the process of saving money.
