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My hometown is Neiqiu town,a small town in Xingtai city,Hebei province.In my hometown,the most attractive resort is Que moutain which is not the highest but the most famous moutain.I will take my foreign friend there and tell him/her the history of Que moutain.Its name derived from a fomous doctor in the history called Bianque.It is said that the head was burried there after he died.For remember of him,the moutain named after him.