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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71614
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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文章衔接手法恰当;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;请增加词汇量的积累,并仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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My hometown is Neiqiu town,a small town in Xingtai city,Hebei province.In my hometown,the most attractive resort is Que moutain which is not the highest but the most famous moutain.I will take my foreign friend there and tell him/her the history of Que moutain.Its name derived from a fomous doctor in the history called Bianque.It is said that the head was burried there after he died.For remember of him,the moutain named after him.

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