托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第47篇:好室友是什么样的?

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While we are studying during the period of university, a good college is anticipated by everyone. But what kind of person can be seen as a good college? Different person has one more thought. However, in my point of view, a really nice college should understand you. Both of us can trust each other and can take care of you while you were in troubles To begin with, it is for sure that both of you should understand and trust each other in order to obtain a peaceful period of time. To illustrate, my sister has a colleague and they were also a good friend and they trust and understand each other well. Once, the friend has lost her cell-phone which has a plenty of meaningful information in. There were my sister and the friends in the room, the friend can doubt my sister in the book, but she does not. And because of the trust between them, they find the cell phone together and finally get the phone back. So trust each other is an indispensable quality of a good college. In addition, your colleague should know that how to cope with you, and a warm-heart college can always make people delighted. For instance, while you are too busy to deal with your works, your college offer provides themselves. It makes no difference whether your colleague can against the problems well or not, you can feel warm from the behaviors and it also can strengthen the friendship between you two. So a colleague with this kind of quality can be seen as a worthy colleague. In conclusion, a person with those two qualities showed above can be viewed as a valuable colleague, but these are only the basic qualities. They may have some additional excellent character such as honest or outgoing.