文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
Current,I have many time to relax at home,while I have these time,I don't know how to use these time.Sometimes,I can sleep in the morning,and hang out with my best friends or alone.But I thing play one or two day which not study is Ok,however,if the spare time become too long,I can feel boring,because I do that things again and again.It is too laught that at school,students who don't like studying ,while stay at home who also can feeling tired. The greatest use of life,I believe that people should take a plan about what time people should do what.When the time become clearly,the life can become enrich.In the matter of fact,people also should have a little patient when they do these things.