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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足。
In the modern time,I have much time to relax at home,while I have these time,I don't know how to use these time.Sometimes,I can sleep in the morning,and hang out with my best friends or alone.But I think play one or two day which not study is good,however,if the spare time which become too long,I can feel boring,because I do that things again and again in leisure time.It is too laught that at school,students who don't like studying ,while stay at home who also can feel tired. The greatest use of life,I believe that people should take a plan about what time people should do what.When the time become absolutely clear,the life can enrich.In the matter of fact,people should also have a little patient when they do these things.
