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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；可适当增加从句的使用。
At the modern time,I have much time to relax at home,while I have these time,I don't know how to use these.Sometimes,I can sleep in the morning,and hang out with my best friends or alone.Nonetheless I think play one or two days which not study is Ok,however,if the spare time which can become too long,I can feel boring,because I do that things again and again.It is too laughable that at school,students who don't like studying ,while stay at home who can also feel tired. The greatest use of life,I believe that people should take a plan about what time people should do what.When the time can become absolutely clear,the life can be enrich.In the matter of fact,people also should have a little patient when they do these things.
