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Nowday,more and more private cars in some big cities bring more air pollution. I think that putting the "pollution tax" on private cars is an effective way to reduce air pollution in the city. The reasons as follows.First, "pollution tax" will may the private car owners spending more money on the car using that somen private car owners cann't affort.So that could reduce the number of the cars and reduce pollution.Second,the "pollution tax"could use to goverment the polltion. So I think the "pollution tax" is a good way for polltion.
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