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2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:50浏览次数:11332
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题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Nowday,more and more private cars in some big cities bring more air pollution. I think that putting the "pollution tax" on private cars is an effective way to reduce air pollution in the city. The reasons as follows.First, "pollution tax" will may the private car owners spending more money on the car using that somen private car owners cann't affort.So that could reduce the number of the cars and reduce pollution.Second,the "pollution tax"could use to goverment the polltion. So I think the "pollution tax" is a good way for polltion.

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