高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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There used to have a lot of green treed in my hometown.And fishes swam freely in the clearly steams.people used to work hard.But, now.Everything has changed.Tall buildings and cars are everywhere,the devolpment of industy products serious enviorment pollutions ,trees and fishes begin to disappear, the most important thing for everyone is 治理污染。