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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

It is quite common situation,a person who is so beautiful or handsome which is easy to communicate with others in society.In fact,when I go to a new environment,if I want to find a new friend,appearance which is significant,for me.Almost person,your friend who is good to hear or see,you can feel cheerful,while if your friend is ugly and dirty,I believe a few people can make friends with these people. Of course,beautiful people who not always nice,after all,as a human being who not have disadvantages. A people who is ugly,maybe this ugly people is so goodness and kind if people come along with his.Different people have different features,judge people with appearance which is wrong.

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