增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
Dear Mr.Johnson We have received 3000 products from your company on 12th December. According to our signing of the No.35 order, the number of products should be 3500, and we still have not received the other 500 products. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours. Wang Haiyang