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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter for the purpose of obtaining the position of office clerk that was posted on China Daily yesterday by your company. I confirmedly believe that my qualification just amply meet your requirements obviously.Firstly,my college major is computer science which indicates that I have excellent computer skills and my typing speed is 100 words per minutes.What's more,I have worked as an editor for several years and this experience has laid a solid foundation for the work here.In the end,my age is just about 23.To sum up,I am confident in my ability to do the job well. It will be greatly appreciated if you could schedule an interview with me.I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours truly, Zhang Wei