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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9778
要求:
题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;从句数量稍显不足,注意增加从句和复杂句的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter for the purpose of obtaining the position of office clerk that was posted on China Daily yesterday by your company. I confirmedly believe that my qualification just amply meet your requirements obviously.Firstly,my college major is computer science which indicates that I have excellent computer skills and my typing speed is 100 words per minutes.What's more,I have worked as an editor for several years and this experience has laid a solid foundation for the work here.In the end,my age is just about 23.To sum up,I am confident in my ability to do the job well. It will be greatly appreciated if you could schedule an interview with me.I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours truly, Zhang Wei

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