正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
Dear Mr. Johnson We have received 3000 products from your company on 12th December. According to our signing of the No.35 order, the number of products should be 3500, and we still have not received the other 500 products. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours. Wang Haiyang