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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；请作者提高词汇表达丰富度，另外请加强单词拼写的检查；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
From: hubin@163.com To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Dear, I have konwn the new product of your company on the exhibitation in York during 15 th to 22nd, and the number of the product is 5670. I'm very intertesed about it. Please send me a price list and instruction of the product. I hope we can establish busniess relationship and thanks for your corporation. Yours faithfully, Hu Bin
