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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用高级词汇；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
From: hubin@163.com To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Dear, I have known the new product of your company on the exhibition in York during 15th to 22nd, and the number of the product is 5670. I'm very interested about it. Please send me a price list and instruction of the product. I hope we can establish business relationship and thanks for your corporation. Yours faithfully, Hu Bin
