增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写方面也要加强;语言不流畅。
From: Li ming Date: Dec. 23rd, 2008 Dear Mary Chen, I will go to beijing for a week on business. So I have no time to talk with you about the celebration of new year. Please tell me the envential decision you have made, including the date, location and preparation needed. Li ming