2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用。

it is not smart to get the conclusion immediately when you heard or saw something. there are some reasons to prove that, first of all, it is just the face thing, you don't see the deep inside of the things, secondly, you can't let your first felling to lead you when you hear or see something, it is not the correct feeling generally, you should know and learn more about the whole things, then analyze why it happened, etc. to think about it. third, you might do the wrong decision if you do that, the result might be not good. in a word, to think what you saw or heard, to know more of things that you saw or heard, and to talk with your family or friends that you trust, remember that don't get the conclusion at once, it is not wise.