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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用。
In modern society,people who develop too much technology product,such as paper and tractor. Paper,all people know paper,due to people usually using this thing in life and work,while only a few people who know trees and glasses are the raw materials of the paper in the past time.People who use paper every day,a rapidly increase number of paper which use in different areas in one year,that means quite a lot of trees and glasses which should be cut.All plants who crying,when the plants become reducing,the animal that can be homeless.In reality, in this environment,some animal species die out. That are many bad influence when the plants die out in the future.People will lose fresh air and fresh water in the world.Firstly,people should stop these behaviour that for example,cut plants and so on.Secondly,person who should keep trees and plant trees and other plants.In addition,government should annoy some knowledges about the benefice of plants. In conclusion,plants and animal which are human being’s friends,so we should protect them,regarding of now and future.
