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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
In modern society,people who develop too much technology product,such as paper and tractor. Paper,all people know paper,due to people usually using this thing in life and work,while only a few people who know trees and glasses are the raw materials of the paper in the past time.People who use paper every day,a rapidly increase number of paper which use in different areas in one year,that means quite a lot of trees and glasses which should be cut.All plants who crying,when the plants become reducing,the animal that can be homeless.In reality, in this environment,some animal species die out. That is many bad influences when the plants die out in the future.People will lose fresh air and fresh water in the world.Firstly,people should stop these behaviours that for example,cut plants and so on.Secondly,person who should keep trees and grows trees and other plants.In addition,government should annoy some knowledges about the benefice of plants. In conclusion,plants and animal which are human being’s friends,so we should protect them,regarding of now and future.
