正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
From: Lisa Harada To: Mary Jenkins Date: Message: Dear Mary Jenkins, Lisa Jenkins called you just now and you are not in office. She works for 1st International Bank. She wants to tell you that your loan application has been approved. Her phone number and email address are 0886-7898-5656 and lisaharada@yahoo.com respectively. Taken by the secretary at Stellar Corporation