小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have many good friends,and Xiaoli is best friend of all.She wear a beautyful yellow T-shirt when I know her at my 12 age.Her home is beside of our school.We went to school together everyday. Her mother and my mother are very good friends too.Now we have been grown ,we will be friends go on.