回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
2013-6-9 Smith, How are you? My wife and I would like to invite you to attend my one year old boy's birthday party,the time is pm 7 o'clock on June 10 in Emperor Hotel,please kindly advise whether you could attend. Regards, Wang Li Wang Li, I will come back to my country to handle some business issues,so I'm afraid that I can't attend,sorry for this.Hope you have a good time and congratulation for the little boy. Best regards, Smith