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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71670
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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Nowaday,the traffic jams are really commonly-seen in our cities,and a great headache for us.In the rushing hours,endless cars gt stuck on the road and the whole city is like a huge parking lot. Many people said that ,the driving restriction,therefore are put forward to discrease the traffic problems in big cities.By implementing driving restriction,around half of the private cars can be control and alleviat in the road,which will help discrease the problems of traffic jams. As far as I'm concerned,the driving restriction can be effective,but it is not the only way out.If the cars ownership is increase continely,this policy will have limited effects.So the government should look at other areas to handle the traffic jams problems,including reasonable road deign and encouragement of the public using the public transport systerm.

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