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Nowaday,the traffic jams are really commonly-seen in our cities,and a great headache for us.In the rushing hours,endless cars gt stuck on the road and the whole city is like a huge parking lot. Many people said that ,the driving restriction,therefore are put forward to discrease the traffic problems in big cities.By implementing driving restriction,around half of the private cars can be control and alleviat in the road,which will help discrease the problems of traffic jams. As far as I'm concerned,the driving restriction can be effective,but it is not the only way out.If the cars ownership is increase continely,this policy will have limited effects.So the government should look at other areas to handle the traffic jams problems,including reasonable road deign and encouragement of the public using the public transport systerm.