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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71619
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。

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Nowadays,the traffic jams are really commonly-seen in our cities,and a great headache for us.In the rush hours,endless cars gt stuck on the road and the whole city is like a huge parking lot. The driving restriction,therefore are put forward to decrease the traffic problems in big cities.By implementing driving restriction,around half of the private cars can be control and alleviate in the road,which will help decrease the problems of traffic jams. As far as I'm concerned,the driving restriction can be effective,but it is not the only way out.If the car ownership is increase sequentially,this policy will have limited effects.So the government should look at other areas to handle the traffic jams problems,including reasonable road deign and encouragement of the public using the public transport system.

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