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My hometown is in a rural,it is a small villege .When I was a child ,I always liked playing with my companies .we made a variety of games,such as running race,fishing,and made hide-and-seek.The living level is not very high,many of us have sisters or brothers,so we should have shared all of goods which we got.Although,there were not enough food or delicious candies,we did no blame parents.Everyone of us knew,the life was not easy to them.They brought two or three children was not ordinary. During my childhood,the environment surrounding us was very well,the water was very clean,there were fewer heavy foggy days,the sky was always very blue. Nowadays ,since the one-child policy was carry out ,most of couples are allowed to give birth to one child.The burden which was bring from feeding child was decreased.People's life become more and more wealthy and wonderful,due to the development of national economy and the sponsor policies to rural area from the centered government.But the sky is no more blue than the past,the air pollution is worse and worse.We have to put on the respirator mask to keep away from dirties. Good environment is the foundation of living,the government should not sacrifice the environment to seek for the GDP.Protecting environment is the most significance thing.