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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22884
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;文章衔接手法恰当;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。

用户练习作文:

My hometown is in a rural,it is a small villege .When I was a child ,I always liked playing with my companies .we made a variety of games,such as running race,fishing,and made hide-and-seek.The living level is not very high,many of us have sisters or brothers,so we should have shared all of goods which we got.Although,there were not enough food or delicious candies,we did no blame parents.Everyone of us knew,the life was not easy to them.They brought two or three children was not ordinary. During my childhood,the environment surrounding us was very well,the water was very clean,there were fewer heavy foggy days,the sky was always very blue. Nowadays ,since the one-child policy was carry out ,most of couples are allowed to give birth to one child.The burden which was bring from feeding child was decreased.People's life become more and more wealthy and wonderful,due to the development of national economy and the sponsor policies to rural area from the centered government.But the sky is no more blue than the past,the air pollution is worse and worse.We have to put on the respirator mask to keep away from dirties. Good environment is the foundation of living,the government should not sacrifice the environment to seek for the GDP.Protecting environment is the most significance thing.

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