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In Brown's home have many clocks. Look,in living room haS a big clocks ,is very old . In the Brown'S bedroom there is a very Cute clocks ,this is his eight birthday gift to his mother,he liked it . Brown's father and mother's also have a clock bedroom,it's bigger that Brown's bedroom is big,but smaller than of the living room . Brown's family is through the clocks to wake up everyday ,so they are very like a clock in their life .