小学英语一年级作文：Clocks

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

In Brown's home has three clocks. Look,in living room has big clocks,is very old . In the Brown'S bedroom there has a very cute clocks,this is his eight's birthday gift to his mother,he liked it . Brown's father and mother's bedroom also have one clock,it's bigger that Brown's bedroom is big,but smaller than of the living room.Brown's family is through the clocks to wake up every day,so they like a clock in their life very much.