单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
In Brown's home has three clocks. Look,in living room has big clocks,is very old . In the Brown'S bedroom has a very cute clocks in there,this is his eight's birthday gift to his mother,he liked it . Brown's father and mother's bedroom also have one clock,it's bigger that Brown's bedroom is big,but smaller than of the living room.Brown's family is through the clocks to wake up every day,so they like a clock in their life very much.