小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

This summer I spent a very pleasant holiday.Before it began,I had had more plans about this vacation.The step one is that I should learn English well and I must do some exercises to keep body health.I am fatter and fatter if I won't lose my weight,of course,I must control my meals.My English teacher said some homework must be done in our holiday and she would check them after vacation.And the second,I would like to join some different kinds of activities.I have a lovely dog whcih follows me for two years.She is my one of the best friends.As soon as I come home,she runs into my hug.I love her very much.At the end,I finished all plans what I made.My mother is very prond of me,my father thinks so as well.