小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

This summer I spent a very pleasant holiday.Before it began,I had had more plans about this vacation.The step one is that I should learn English well and I must do some exercises to keep body health.I am fatter and fatter if I won't lose my weight,of course,I must control my meals.My English teacher said some homework must be done in our holiday and she would check them after vacation.And the second,I would like to join some different kinds of activities.I have a lovely dog which follows me for two years.She is my one of the best friends.As soon as I come home,she runs into my hug.I love her very much.In the end,I finished all plans what I made.My mother is very proud of me,my father thinks so as well.