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Hi John, This is Tom Smith,sales manager of Fox Electronic Comply,nice to meet you here. As you know,our company always design new products,and now we are going to have a new product to sale.To have a good beginning of saling,I'd like to have a meeting with you on June 20,talk about the launch date of the new product and advertising campaign.Hope we have a good deal and build a long term business cooperation. Best regards, Tom Smith