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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:45529
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。

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How are you? TEM-4 is around the corner. According to the teachers’ telling, I know passing TEM4 is not an easy thing. Although it may not be too difficult to pass it, getting a high mark needs hard work. So I often go to the library to study. I like the feeling of working hard. While I prepare for the exam, I often feel so satisfied. I think it’s a good thing for me to prepare TEM4. The most difficult thing for me to do well in TEM-4 is the vocabulary. I find it’s hard to remember, and I am unwilling to remember words, because in middle school and high school I didn't need to remember vocabulary on purpose. I can remember them through the exercises. Unfortunately, I can’t do it now. But my problem is I still can’t find a good method which is fit for me to remember vocabulary well. Could you do me a favor? I am looking forward to your replying. Best wishes!

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