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Nowadays,can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology. Online shopping is welcomed by most people with various reasons. For the perspective of consumer,it can save some time for people who don't have much spare time just by clicking the mouse and they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers,not only can it cut some costs for those who don't have much circulating funds,but also they don't have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However,there are still some defects in online shopping. First,face to face deals makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second,people will lose the fun of bargain.Therefore,we have to weigh pro and It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It's of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.
