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字数：300 满分：100分
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
The Disadvantages of being careful with Money in Daily Life Being careful with money in daily life has always been a hot topic.Some people believe that this will not make us smart consumers.As for me,it is not a good choice to keep your money in the bank. To begin with,the value of money is changing with the things of price.For instance,there are two people,one with the money,but also loans to buy a house,the other to be careful with money,always put money in the bank,twenty years later,the former paid off the loan in the house lived for twenty years,the latter kept the money simply can not buy the house which was brought by the former people.It is not difficult to find that people earn money this year,after ten years to spend,the money will depreciate. Next,saving money always makes people less satisfied.There's something that people want to buy in daily life.It makes people quiet unpleasant when people in order to save money and give up their favorite things.One time,two times,it doesn't matter,but the countless times in everyday life can make people disamenity. In brief,I prefer to use it to meet my own money than to put my money in the bank.While being careful with money is a virtue,it still has some disadvantages in people's daily life.
