文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;可适当增加高级词汇的使用量;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
The Main Difference Between My College Life And My middle School Life It's interesting to note that middle school and college are generally described as "hell" and "heaven".The main difference are curriculum and campus activities. Almost every middle school students want to addimtted a good college.In order to pass the entrance exam,they have a tight schedule:eight classes to attend during the day,and often there are another one in the morning,three in the evening.Although,they are very busy,all of their assignment are the teacher's told.Besides this,they have no other plan to themselves. By contrast,at college students have fewer classes,with an average of three or four per day.Hence,they have much more time to do what they want to do.For instance,activity,part time job,traveling and so on.As long as they don't have classes,once in a while,especially in a very cold morning,they can linger in bed and take time getting up.In brief,college students have more time and opportunites to develop in an all-round way than they had in middle school. Personally,you must through the "hell" if you want to enter a "heaven".