作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
It's interesting to note that middle school and college are generally described as "hell" and "heaven".The main difference is curriculum and campus activities. Almost all middle school students want to enter a good college.In order to pass the entrance exam,they have a tight schedule:eight classes to attend during the day,and often there is another one in the morning,three in the evening.Although they are very busy,all of their assignments are the teacher's told.Besides this,they have no other plan to themselves. By contrast,at college students have fewer classes,with an average of three or four per day.Hence,they have much more time to do what they want to do.For instance, taking part in activity,part time job,traveling and so on.As long as they don't have classes,once in a while,especially in a very cold morning,they can linger in bed and take time getting up.In brief,college students have more time and opportunites to develop in an all-round way than they were in middle school. Personally,you must pass the test of "hell" if you want to enter a "heaven".