句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
A foreign friend of mine will come to China to visit my homtown. I am going to take him to visit Beijing if possible. Beijing is not only the capital of China, but also one of the most developed cities in China. On the one hand,over the past five thousand years, there were many emperor living in Beijing. Therefore, Beijing is a city full of history atmosphere. Hutong, which is the symbol of the Old Beijing, can be seen very easily in Beijing. Nowadays, Hutong is mostly the remaining of Qing dynasty, which is of much value. On the other hand, There are many universities in Beijing. My foreign friend can fully experience Chinese culture. I insist that Chinese culture has a great impact on foreigners and can eaily catch their eyes. Being is my hometown. I believe that my foreign friend will be attractive by it.