高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

简单句偏多了；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；文章词汇表达多样性要提高，单词拼写方面还要继续努力。

In the past,hometown arround with green tree.And many freshes are swimming in the beatuiful river.There are some odd-looking houses and little.A lot of people work hard and difficultly life.Now,highly building in somewhere to see and big or small cars drive in the.The enviroment of is bad.Trees decreasingly and freshes gradually die out.So we should deal with the bad enviroment now.