小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短。

I like travelling.Nearly I go abroad once per month.Last month,the place I went was a big city I have ever been to.There are many modern buildings and there is much delicious food.I stayed there for two weeks and made more new friends.As soon as I arrived,the culture of city made me very exciting.Because of this,I love this city at once.It is larger than Shanghai,but there are fewer people than every city in China.I saw one of the most beautiful flowers in this city.Just like beauty.After had had a week,I began to learn language.Actually,it was more difficult for me to study it,but I never give up,so I can speak a few sentences.If you would like me to tell you about this city's all things,I will show you things which I saw.I can teach you some words as quickly as possible if you want to study.Travelling is an interesting expercience.Here are some good advice for you,first,making sure you like it.Second,protecting yourself when you go out.That is all.