小学二年级英语作文:My Favourite Teacher

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

I like Iris,my English teacher.She not only is very nice,but also professional.She also says that she likes the job too much.She has two black eyes and long hair as well.She comes from the U.S.After having the class,she always tells us some stories about her country.For example,In that country,there are fewer buliding than here,some women don't like going outside all the time.At present,she says she would like to study Chinese.She loves Chinese culture when she stayed here over one year.Although,she is an English teacher,but I want to learn more about Chinese's everything.