小学二年级英语作文:My Favourite Teacher

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文章词汇使用比较恰当，高级词汇积累不足；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩。

I like Iris,my English teacher.She not only is very nice,but also professional.She also says that she likes the job too much.She has two black eyes and long hair as well.She comes from the U.S.After having the class,she always tells us some stories about her country.For example,In that country,there are fewer buliding than here,some women don't like going outside all the time.At present,she says she would like to study Chinese.She loves Chinese culture when she stayed here over one year.Although,she is an English teacher,but I want to learn more about Chinese's everything.Recently,she has a new boyfriend who is a chinese boy.They are falling in love quickly.Iris hopes that she can married in China.