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这是一则关于日程安排的通知。需将日程安排一一列出,内容并不复杂,可以不使用完整的句子。
文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;复杂句的使用不是很丰富;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Notice There will have a visiting to Nan Lin Farm of Qing Long town on June 20th,2013,below is the itinerary: 8:30am,visit the office of farm,the manager will have a brief introduction of farm. 9:30am,visit the farm. 10:30am,visit farm-run factory. 11:30am,have a launch on the family of farm. If you are willing to attend,please arrive the gate of library before 6:30am,the car will leave on 6:40 on time.