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As a student,we should try our best to master the knowledge,review the old things and preview the new things. We also should do some sports.As we know,sports are good for us,it's can make our body strong. We will make many friends in our life,friends bring us friendship、happiness and so on. When you unhappy,you can talk with your friends,and they will cheer you up and give you something useful advice. Good hobbies are nesscery for us.Geting up and go to bed early.Reading some good books in free time.Keeping the room cleaning.Eating bearkfast on time and so on. We also help others as usual as possible. I’m sure that everyone can success if they work hard.
