简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
I am a middle school student.I work hard every day.I always finish my homework on time.After class,I like to do some sports to keep fit and active.I like making friends.I think good friendship is an important part of being happy.In my free time,I have great fun collecting stamps.That's my hobby.I also like to help others.On weekends,I help my parents with the housework at home.In a word,I am very happy and I meet every day with a smile.