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I am a middle school student.I always finish my homework on time.After class,I like to do some sports and it's good for health.I like making friends.I think good friendship is an important part of being happy.In my free time,I have great fun collecting stamps.That's my hobby.I also like to help others.On weekends,I help my parents with the housework at home.In a word,I am very happy and I meet every day with a smile.