2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Undoubtly,education occupys an extremely important part in reality.Even it will be influenced directly your work to some degree.Accoreding to a recent statistics,the level of your education determined your work and salary.In all,under the stress of employment,someone who own the doctoral degree have natural adventage comparing with other college or high scholol graguates.In view of wages,it is nearly as much as three times gap between high educated people and less degree people.Therefore,we can safely draw a conclusion that we must pay more government expenditure to our country education so as to reduce the unemployment rates and national economy.